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it's slightly hard to do a comprehensive review without my good headphones, but you have done well, your track is very industrial, it feels a little void at times which is fine since you seem to be aiming at a more relaxed slow pace track. perhaps a little mixing and making it 30 seconds longer and you will have a 5 star track. right around 0:15 to 0:45 is where i really enjoyed it, the rest of the song is just kind of 'meh' for me. i hope this review helps.

Numi responds:

I'd definitely say re=listen with good headphones or speakers, the sub frequencies really make this in my opinion. Also, it's only a work in progress. I will be adding quite a bit and changing some stuff up. Thanks for the feedback, and be sure to check back soon for the final product!

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i felt the build up to the lyrics at 1:30 could have been better. perhaps have a bit here and there through the first minute and a half. hope this helps. nice ending.

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

I've tryed. It and. It sounds off ill try a bit more.

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